Avatar of Ana_Cde Ana_C în Poezii în Engleză 11 comentarii

There's a song that's inside of my soul.
It's the one that I've tried to write over and over again
I'm awake in the infinite cold.
But you sing to me over and over and over again.
So, I lay my head back down.
And I lift my hands and pray
To be only yours, I pray, to be only yours
I know now you're my only hope.
Sing to me the song of the stars.
Of your galaxy dancing and laughing and laughing again.
When it feels like my dreams are so far
Sing to me of the plans that you have for me over again.
I give you my destiny.
I'm giving you all of me.
I want your symphony, singing in all that I am
At the top of my lungs, I'm giving it back.

11 Comentarii

  • Avatar of castorulde castorul

    prea mult "again"
    however, poezia în ciuda platitudinii mesajului se remarcă prin exteriorul cvasiacademic..
    good job!
    considering that you wrote in english! ;)

  • Avatar of ClayofHopede ClayofHope

    Don't want to seem mean,but..."A walk to remember":)

  • Avatar of fenixonude fenixonu

    I give you my destiny!!!

  • Avatar of corinushde corinush

    A walk to remember indeed..the song Mandy Moore sung there..
    Serios, asta e creatie proprie??

  • Avatar of star77de star77

    Plagiat grosolan. The conclusion was made after reading your "works" in Romanian. Vino cu ceva propriu. Bafta!

  • Avatar of star77de star77

    errata: was made - was drawn. Pornii sa comentez in romana si...

  • Avatar of Ana_Cde Ana_C

    este poezie alcatuita de mine....\
    de ce la iunii din voi va place asa mult sa criticati,nestiind nimik????????

  • Avatar of corinushde corinush
    :)) Ia vezi, de tine e alcatuita?

    Si presupun ca faptul ca piesa e cantata si de Switchfoot, tot nu te impiedica sa zici ca-i creatie proprie, nu?
    Si mai esti indignata de critica..

  • Avatar of castorulde castorul

    it smells like ban, baby..

  • Avatar of Ana_Cde Ana_C

    corinush,,,,,eshti o [cenzurat] cari s baga pi uni nu trebuie:DD::DD:

    lasa'mi poeziile in pace...autoareo!...:D

  • de MickyMouse

    Umm... Not to be mean or any thing but..... uhhhhhh..... a walk to remember_ So WHAT
    That was a great poem i bet all you nasty commenters still watch Winnie the Pooh and think every verse should have a big bear singing PAss the honey.... a bunch of uncivilized critics is what you all are............
    Any way... amazing poem.... keep on writing.....
    P.S... a walk to remember was a great movie thank you very much....

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